
Originally Posted by
Mike Foreman
I just gave it a listen. It was very soothing & despite its length, never got boring (which, to me, often happens in EDM). I listened through my laptop speakers, which are actually pretty good as laptop speakers go but nonetheless, still are laptop speakers. I did that purposefully since I beliwve if a mix sounds good on laptop speakers it will likely translate on most other systems. Anyway, there were 2 things I noticed in the mix that I felt could be improved upon. First, I felt like the hi hat in the loudest sections of the song (for example the section leading up to the 1 minute mark) was a few dBs too loud. That is probably more a preference thing than an actual problem so take that for what it's worth. The other thing occurs in those sections as well: The bass is very audible until the synths hit. For example, it's very out front from around 1:39 to 2:15 but when those synths ramp up at 2:15 the bass kind of disappears. I'm not sure if you have thought about doing any ducking to help with that, but I'd probably use Trackspacer to carve out the appropriate EQ range from the synth sounds to make room for the bass. It could be this is less noticeable on systems that can deliver more bottom end as the lows & sublows of the bass probably don't clash with the synths but the upper mids &/or highs of the bass seem to be getting lost under the synths.
Don't take those criticisms as anything other than hopefully helpful feedback. I liked this a lot.
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